DragonFire
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My name is DragonFire.. Alpha male of KokutanKage!
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Post by DragonFire on Sept 30, 2005 10:14:09 GMT 10
Name:DragonFire Gender:Male Age:2years
Discription: DragonFire is a blackish gray, with alittle bit of red on him. The red is on his anout, ears, tail tip, and paws. DragonFire is stronge, when he has to be. His eye an red, like the eyes of a dragon.
Personality: DragonFire like to rough house with his pack members. He is dangerous when need to protect his family and pack. He's a wolf that is friendly. And, aggeresive, but only sometimes. DragonFire is alert and always detremind to finish what he started.
Past: DragonFire wondered out of the den when he could see and was adopted by a female red wolf. The mate of the red wolf, DarkClaw, didn't like him, so he chased DragonFire out of the camp, when the his mate had gone hunting, for food.
DragonFire got revenge on DarkClaw by starting a battle against him, when he was older. DragonFire won the battle, but he was injuried by a hard blow, from DarkClaw. But, DragonFire servived and went in sreach for a pack, that would respect him.
One day he was walking next to the border of ShadowRiver pack. The Alphess let him join and be the Alpha male, of the pack. He liked the idea of being the Alpha male and he thought he hoped the pack members would like him as their leader.
Pack: ShadowRiver (Alpha male) Mate: None Pups: None
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Post by Sashira on Sept 30, 2005 11:16:29 GMT 10
He can't have strange fur colors, has to be like a normal wolf. Other than that, it's great. Welcome to Under the Moon.
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HalfMoon
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Post by HalfMoon on Oct 3, 2005 16:43:31 GMT 10
Needs more in description and personality, and like Kaligula mentioned, normal colours.
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DragonFire
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My name is DragonFire.. Alpha male of KokutanKage!
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Post by DragonFire on Oct 4, 2005 12:06:25 GMT 10
is that better?
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HalfMoon
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Post by HalfMoon on Oct 4, 2005 15:44:47 GMT 10
no, lots more. Two lines is the minimum
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DragonFire
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My name is DragonFire.. Alpha male of KokutanKage!
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Post by DragonFire on Oct 16, 2005 10:41:49 GMT 10
Is that better? I changed some of it.
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HalfMoon
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Post by HalfMoon on Oct 26, 2005 21:46:52 GMT 10
Is the red a bright red? Or the red you see on wolves o.o?
Other than that query it's great! Accepted if the red isn't bright and abnormal [Like a blue wolf o.o]
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