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Post by moonshine on Jul 29, 2008 4:22:25 GMT 10
Name Moonshine Breed Wolf Age ??young adult?? Gender Female Description She has a black coat and cool blue eyes (which is rare). One of her ears has a large nick in it and she has rough short fur. She likes to have her ears hang down making them look bigger. PersonalityShe may do things with out thinking and very shy but if you get to know her she willnever let you down if its up to her. She loves water but has a great fear of the dead and badgers. She also hates very high spots. HistoryShe was born in the fist days of spring and was very close to her mother.She loved running after birds and one day when she was chasing a flock of birds when she could hear something. When she came back both mother and brother were dead making her live by her self. Sample PostMoonshine could feel the cool wind flow pass. She could she a flock of birds fly tree to tree. She got up and walked to a small rock. "Just one more day of hunting on my own...even though I would be any way." Moonshine looked at the rock as it broke under her paw. She ran to some trees. "I can't let my self down!" [optinal] Picture(sorry hard to find right pic.)
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Post by HalfMoon on Jul 30, 2008 20:43:48 GMT 10
You need to add more into Description, Personality and History. Your Sample Post is a little unclear, but you just have to add two more lines in Description, one more line of Personality and two more lines in History.
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Post by moonshine on Jul 31, 2008 5:15:36 GMT 10
is this good?
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Post by HalfMoon on Aug 1, 2008 8:02:45 GMT 10
Yep, I would prefer if you put years in age, but accepted.
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